"THUD STRONG!!" the purple-hued brute roared proudly to the sun. He growled deeply and ran his hands over his big pecs, squeezing his plump nipples between his fingers.
All Keln could do was groan his pain, knowing that he'd only experienced the beginning of his ordeal. His loss to the brute would have consequences.
Dat Thud.
ReplyDeleteI wondered back in the beginning about making Keln the winner, but I think in this case, Thud is just too much ogre for him to take down.
DeleteWould have been interesting to have an alternative ending with keln the winner in an endurance contest as Thud may be to fat to go the distance.
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